Pre-script: Here goes my first poem in Hindi.. :) :)
तू क्या जाने मेरी कहानी ,
तू क्या जाने मेरी कहानी ,
चादर ओढे लेटी वो तन्हाई ,
गले लगाने को बेकरार हो जैसे ,
झाँकती तो कभी पुकारती वो पल पल ,कह रही हो जैसे आजा मिटा दे ये हलचल,
मेरी बाहों के घेरे में सिमट के ,
सारे गमों का इज़हार आज तू खुल के कर दे ,
और बह लेने दे ये मोती बेशुमआर,
छट जाये शायद तेरी कुछ उदासी ,
तू क्या जाने मेरी कहानी ,
चादर ओढे लेटी वो तन्हाई ,
तमाम हसरतों को उड़ान दे रही हो जैसे ,
हज़ारों उल्झनों के जवाब देती जा रही न जाने कैसे ,
तांकती झाँकती कह रही वो बार बार ,
डूब के तो देख एक बार इस दरिया में ,
तू पहुँच जायेगा हर मुश्किल के उस पार
This is so beautiful !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much green speck.god bless! :)
DeleteLovely lines, though I had a hard time reading it because of the size and color of font. I love your blog theme, but the black background makes reading quite difficult.
ReplyDeleteHi Damyanti,
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog and appreciating it. I have edited this post and increased the text size so that it is readable..I hope that it's clearly visible and readable now :)
Beautiful expression. I loved this line, "और बह लेने दे ये मोती बेशुमआर" The use of word 'Moti' is superb here.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru.. :)
Deletelovely lines...
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Thank you very much Fatima. :)
Deleteloneliness sumtimes does solve many a problems n gives u d strength n d inspiration to fulfill d desires.. it doesnt seem like ur first hindi poem at all.. well done PUJI :)
ReplyDeleteby d way, i hate d word recognition thing to post d comment,, dont get it right for many turns :(
Thank you very much dreaming wanderer for appreciating it so much..
Deleteeven I don't like "captchas" employed by blogger for security purpose..Is there any way I can get rid of it?? be that as it may, atleast you're able to recognise the words, I am not even able able to do that.. not able to comment on so many blogposts because of this feature.. :(