Friday 9 March 2012

BARREN HEART..

                                                         


                                         
                                               
                                        Underneath the blanket of stars,
                           I would sleep with the door ajar.
                           You managed to peep in,
                           When the lights were dim.
                           And see just that one star,
                           Kindling in those dark eyes.
                           You claimed like you were that light,
                           Capable of dazzling the night.
                           You awakened the wistful dreams,
                           Craving for reality in a dejected life.
                           Love flowed like an unremitting stream,
                           Seeds blossomed into the Love amaranth,
                           But the heat of lust that served as a bee,
                           Drew on the nectar, left the heart barren.

9 comments:

  1. how do u come up with such ideas? :) beautifully penned!

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  2. @Sawan : Sometimes it just flows out spontaneously..Anyways, you are never short of ideas. Your work is lovely. :)
    Thank you very much for the appreciation.. :):D

    @Rahul Bhatia: Thank you very much Sir.. :)

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  3. Beautiful expression...Loved the two lines in the beginning and the imaginary is just brilliant!

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  4. Thank you very much Saru. :)

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  5. beautiful puji :) my eyes grew bigger with each line I read..
    n d end was a stark turn..
    keep going :)

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  6. Thank you very much for your humble words, Dreaming wanderer. :)

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  7. wonderful write....thank you for sharing

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  8. Thank you very much Shamsud. :)

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